Q & A
Mark also has some comments and questions:
cant follow up on your story. if it dips in the mud then soars into the sunshine it would be like a rollercoaster of nightmares
Quality is something that is necessarily variable in such an enterprise. Though I am starting to worry that I started out with something too involutely me, which people are finding hard to connect to. One of the things I want in this story is for people to be able to feel like themselves. Always, please feel free to say, “meanwhile, on the other side of the world…”
This is hyper-text. Continuity? We don’t need no steenkin’ continuity. Some people think weevils add flavour.
dont know where she has been, cant introduce a new character semi-prince, or princess) so early. too much freedom in this environment, find out how inquisitive, or how much Max knows about herself already
Lightness, quickness, and multiplicity are virtues in this millennium. Feel free to invent and circumvent. Besides, you always have less freedom than you think you do.
wont the story spread out like a big virus, all parallel and
stuff? like two people read your page and write responses, and two people read theirs, so there is one start, two second bits, and four different stories by the third section?
Oh, hopefully!